Everybody's a critic!

Once upon a time, I like toast. The End.

My dad didn't think this was much of a story when I told it to him.

srah - Monday, 6 June 2005 - 8:16 PM
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Comments (4)

gravatar katie - June 9, 2005 - 8:06 PM -

Well I like it. It speaks to me on so many levels. Perhaps I will write an analytical essay.

gravatar J - June 9, 2005 - 9:34 PM -

Well, I like it. But I think the problem is that you don't develop the toast character enough. The audience really never grows to care about it.

gravatar srah - June 9, 2005 - 10:48 PM -

Toast is one of those legendary characters that everyone knows and loves already.

gravatar Anonymous - June 10, 2005 - 11:52 PM -

A certain Mr. B once forced me take a photo of him eating toast! Of course, he was only 3 or 4 at the time. There must be more to toast than we think....

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